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Band 4+: You are going to another country to study. You would like to do a part-time job while you are studying, so you want to ask a friend who lives there for some help. Write a letter to this friend. In your letter: -give details of your study plans -explain why you want to get a part-time job -suggest how your friend could help you find a job

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I am happy to tell you that my student visa was approved last week and I booked my ticket already..My flight is this coming Wednesday.I enrolled at the Toronto University and Taking electrical Engineering…I have 3 classes per week and That is morning session only from 8 to 11 am..While studying I want to find a part job..My parents would pay my full tuition and I don’t want to bother them for my allowance..For now I am looking for part job in order to support my daily needs and studies..I am seeking for help from you.If you have any recommendation for me I’m glad for it…It would be fine if it’s related to cashier because I have experienced to it.Last year I worked at Jollibee as a cashier…

I am looking forward to hear from you soon..Thank you

Sincerely yours,

Jenny

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Overall Band Score

4.5

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Vocabulary Complexity:
A2 - Upper Beginner
Consider using more varied and advanced words.

Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:
No noticeable repetition! Great job!

Task Response

6.5

The letter effectively addresses the task by providing details about the study plans, explaining the need for a part-time job, and suggesting how the friend could help. However, the letter could be more detailed and organized. The letter falls short of the required 150 words.

Coherence & Cohesion

The letter lacks a clear structure and flow. The ideas are not presented in a logical order, and the transitions between paragraphs are not smooth. The numerous grammatical errors further hinder the coherence and cohesion.

Lexical Resource

4.5

The letter demonstrates a good range of vocabulary, but there are some instances of repetition and less precise word choices. The vocabulary is generally appropriate for the task.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

3.5

The letter contains numerous grammatical errors, including incorrect punctuation, verb tenses, and sentence structure. These errors significantly affect the overall clarity and readability of the letter.

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