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Band 6+: You have recently started work in a new company. Write a letter to an English-speaking friend. In your letter, - Explain why you changed jobs. - Describe your new job. - Tell him / her your other news.

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Dear Anges,

I hope you are doing well. I am writing this letter to inform you about my new job.

In my office before, it was really hard for me to fulfil my daily necessities. So, I used to take another job to earn money. Because of that, I was utterly exhausted after working. Hence, I decided to look for other opportunities. There was a company which offered me as their employee and I accepted their offer as soon as immediately.

To be honest, I fancy being in my office now because the salary is better than in previous office. Moreover, this work is suitable for my educational background so that I am capable of using my skills and experiences.

I want to tell you something that the employer in my office will look for the new employees next month. I suggest that you register in this occasion because it is worth it as an employee in this office.

I am looking forward to hearing from you.

Best regards,

Naufal Hilmy Siregar

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Overall Band Score

6.5

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Vocabulary Complexity:
B2 - Upper Intermediate
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Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

office: 4

because: 3

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Task Response

The letter appropriately addresses all parts of the task, explaining the reason for the job change, describing the new job, and sharing other news. The content is relevant and sufficiently detailed. To improve, consider elaborating further on the 'other news' aspect to provide a more balanced response.

Coherence & Cohesion

The letter is generally coherent, but some sentences could be linked more smoothly to improve the flow. For example, the transition between explaining the reason for changing jobs and describing the new job could be clearer. Consider using transition words or phrases to connect ideas more effectively. Paragraphing is adequate, but ensure each paragraph focuses on a single main idea.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is adequate for the task, but there are opportunities to use more precise and varied language. For instance, instead of 'fulfil my daily necessities,' you could say 'meet my financial needs' or 'cover my living expenses.' Similarly, 'fancy being in my office' could be replaced with 'enjoy working in my new office' or 'appreciate my new job.' Expanding your range of vocabulary will enhance the impact of your writing.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The letter contains grammatical errors that affect clarity. For example, 'I accepted their offer as soon as immediately' should be 'I accepted their offer almost immediately' or 'I accepted their offer as soon as possible.' Also, 'the employer in my office will look for the new employees' could be improved to 'my employer will be looking for new employees.' Pay attention to verb tense consistency and word order to improve grammatical accuracy.

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