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Band 6+: You rented a car from car rental company. The air conditioner has stopped working. You phoned the company a week ago but it still has not been repaired. In your letter 1. Introduce yourself 2 explain the situation 3.say what action you would like the company to take.

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Dear Sir/Madam

I’m writing this letter to request your immediate support for repairing a car I have rented from your company just recently.

The car was rented more than a week ago under my name, Sepehr, and it was only a day after the rental that I realised the air conditioner has stopped working. I am unable to comment of the issue as there is no sign of damage to any parts, and I cannot see any leakage or hear suspicious noise from the car.

I would like to highlight that I tried to call you last week on the numbers provided on your website but I never managed to speak with you.

As I have rented this car for 2 months for everyday use, I would like to ask your immediate review of the issue and confirmation on the earliest possible time you can organise a repair or a replacing service.

If none of the these services are offered by your company I would like to ask for a refund.

Thank you for your help

Sepehr

Word Count: 177

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Overall Band Score

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Vocabulary Complexity:
B1 - Intermediate
Using more sophisticated words could be beneficial.

Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

rented: 3

would: 3

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Task Response

The letter adequately addresses all parts of the task. The request for a repair or replacement is clear. However, more detail on the rental agreement could strengthen the response.

Coherence & Cohesion

The letter's message is mostly understandable. However, the flow could be improved with clearer transitions between ideas and better paragraphing. The grammar errors impact the overall coherence.

Lexical Resource

5.5

The vocabulary used is appropriate for the context. While there is a range of words, more precise and sophisticated language could enhance the letter's impact. Some word choices could be more accurate.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

4.5

The letter contains several grammatical errors that affect clarity and fluency. Improving grammatical accuracy is crucial for a higher score. A wider range of grammatical structures would also be beneficial.

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Band 6+: You rented a car from car rental company. The air conditioner has stopped working. You phoned the company a week ago but it still has not been repaired. In your letter 1. Introduce yourself 2 explain the situation 3.say what action you would like the company to take.

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