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Band 4+: You should spend about 20 minutes on this task The table below shows the percentages of the population by age groups in one town who rode bicycles in 2011. Write at least 150 words.

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The image displays data in a table illustrating percentages of bicycle riders within a town segmented by age and gender for the year 2011; the age groups are categorized as follows: age group 0-9 shows 51.4% female and 50.3% male, age group 10-17 with 42.2% female and 24.6% male, age group 18-39 reveals 17.1% female and 9.7% male, age group 40-59 includes 12.3% female and 8.0% male, age group 60+ comprises 18.5% female and 13.2% male.

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The table illustrates the number of females and males,who rode a bike in 2011 by age group.

Overall,There are 5 group of age,from 0 to 60+.Moreover there are two gender,Female and Male.In 2011 riders bike,from 0 to 9 ages,had the highest number in boys,even in girls.However the lowest one was, age in 18 between 39.

In 2011,ages who rode a bike was 51.4 in female,but in males was 50.3.Litle bit lower that females.The second lowest number of users was in the age from 10 to 17 with 42.2 and 24.6.In womans had 42.2,meanwhile in mans was 24.6,almost lower for 2 times compared to girls.The next age is 18 and 39.They had a only 17.1 in females,9.7 in males.

Whereas in age 60+ was more than 18-39 ages with 18.5 and 13.2.The most lowest one was 40-59.In that ages in female had 12.3,but in male was only 8,it is the lowest one in 2011 year.

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The report addresses the task, but there are some issues with organization and clarity. The overview is present but could be more insightful. The report includes relevant data from the table, but the analysis is somewhat superficial and lacks depth. Grammatical errors and awkward phrasing are present throughout the report, which affects its overall coherence. To improve, focus on writing a more comprehensive overview, providing more detailed analysis of the data, and ensuring grammatical accuracy.

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The report lacks clear organization and logical flow. The ideas are not presented in a cohesive manner, making it difficult to follow the main points. Paragraphing is inconsistent, and transitions between sentences and paragraphs are weak. Consider organizing the information more logically, perhaps by discussing each age group separately or by comparing and contrasting the percentages of male and female riders within each group. Use transition words and phrases to connect ideas and improve the overall coherence of the report.

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The vocabulary used is basic and repetitive. There is limited use of more sophisticated language to describe the data. The report relies on simple words and phrases, which restricts the ability to convey the information accurately and effectively. Expand your vocabulary related to data analysis and comparison. Use synonyms and varied sentence structures to make the report more engaging and informative. Boost vocabulary complexity to elevate the overall score.

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The report contains numerous grammatical errors, including incorrect verb tenses, subject-verb agreement issues, and awkward sentence structures. These errors significantly impact the clarity and accuracy of the report. Focus on improving your understanding of basic grammar rules and sentence construction. Proofread carefully to identify and correct errors before submitting your work.

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