🔥 Today Only: Save 30% on Premium — Offer Ends Soon! - Upgrade Now!

Letter

Band 8+: Your friend had made a plan for you to see a movie together but you cannot now not join him. You've found another friend who can go instead of you. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: Explain why you cannot go anymore Say who can go instead of you Say why this person is a good person to go with

See all user-written answers on this topic

Skyrocket your IELTS band score by 1-2 points in under a month with our premium plan!

Note: Both the topic and the answer were created by one of our users.

Dear Jack,

I am doing well. I hope you are great too. I do not feel good to inform you that will not be able to make it for the movie plan we made for tomorrow night due to family responsibility. But don’t be sad, I found someone who can join you for the fun night.

As you know my father is not doing good these days. I called him to check if he was feeling any better and got to know that doctor’s do not see any improvement in his health and want him to do some more test tomorrow. I promised him to go to the hospital with him and spend the rest of the day with him to make him feel better.

So what if I can’t join you, I have already convinced Jayesh to go with you as I know you and Jayesh bond really well and share similar interest in fiction movies. I am sure you guys will enjoy each other’s company during the movie.

I will wait for the next time to go for a film with you.

Best wishes,

Shivani

Word Count: 187

Check Your Answer On This Topic?

Check My Answer

Generate A Band-9 Sample Answer?

Generate A Sample

Overall Band Score

(+/- 0.5)

Vocabulary Complexity:
A2 - Upper Beginner
Consider using more varied and advanced words.

Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:
No noticeable repetition! Great job!

Task Response

8.5

The letter fully addresses the task by explaining why the writer cannot go to the movie, stating who can go instead, and explaining why that person is a good choice. Well done!

Coherence & Cohesion

The letter is coherent and cohesive, with ideas logically organized and connected. Paragraphing is well-managed. To enhance coherence further, consider using more transition words or phrases.

Lexical Resource

There is a good range of vocabulary used appropriately. Consider incorporating more sophisticated vocabulary to elevate the lexical resource score further.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

A wide range of grammatical structures is used with good control. Some minor errors in punctuation and grammar are present. Proofreading can help in improving accuracy.

Answers On The Same Topic:

Your friend had made a plan for you to see a movie together but you cannot now not join him. You’ve found another friend who can go instead of you. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: Explain why you cannot go anymore Say who can go instead of you Say why this person is a good person to go with

Dear Priya, I hope this letter finds you well and that your family is doing okay. My reason for writing is because I won’t be able to make it to the movies next Thursday. I’m saddened by this as I was really looking for forward to seeing this movie. Unfortunately, my department has scheduled a […]

Band 6+

Your friend had made a plan for you to see a movie together but you cannot now not join him. You’ve found another friend who can go instead of you. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: Explain why you cannot go anymore Say who can go instead of you Say why this person is a good person to go with

Dear Esha, I am writing this letter in regard to our previous conversation about the movie. We decided to watch it together. Knowing that you really wanted to watch this movie together, I can’t make it. On Thursday, March 21, my goldfish kind of brain completely forgot that I have a doctor’s appointment. As you […]

Band 7+

Your friend had made a plan for you to see a movie together but you cannot now not join him. You’ve found another friend who can go instead of you. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: Explain why you cannot go anymore Say who can go instead of you Say why this person is a good person to go with

Dear Heta, How are you? It’s been a while hasn’t it ?The last time we meet met at sushant wedding. Anyway, I am writing this letter in reagards to our plan to go to watch film on next sunday.unfortunately, I cannot join you because i have my practical exam on monday and for that i […]

Band 5+

Your friend had made a plan for you to see a movie together but you cannot now not join him. You’ve found another friend who can go instead of you. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: Explain why you cannot go anymore Say who can go instead of you Say why this person is a good person to go with

Dear Simran, Hope, you’re doing well. I know that you made for us to watch the movie together, but, unfortunately, I can’t join you now. Actually, I have an urgent meeting at office on that day and my manager told me not the ship that meet-up, therefore, I am not available on that day. On […]

Band 4+

Your friend had made a plan for you to see a movie together but you cannot now not join him. You’ve found another friend who can go instead of you. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: Explain why you cannot go anymore Say who can go instead of you Say why this person is a good person to go with

Dear Jamal, I hope you are doing well. I am writing this letter because I am unable to come with you for the movie and I apologize. Actually, my grandfather’s health is not good since the last 2 days, so he was admitted to the hospital and I will stay with him for a week […]

Band 5+

See All

Check Your Answer On This Topic?

Generate A Band-9 Sample Answer?

Overall Band Score

Task Response

Coherence & Cohesion

Lexical Resource

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

Answers On The Same Topic:

Other Topics:

You have borrowed some books from your university library, but you have not returned them yet. Write a letter to the library official and in your letter describes what happened, express your sincere words of apology and offer what you can do to make it up

You play a team sport with some friends. Last week a member of the team had an accident and wasn't able to play with you. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: · tell him/her which team won · describe the weather conditions that day · say how you felt about the match

Check Your Answer On This Topic?

Generate A Band-9 Sample Answer?

Overall Band Score

Task Response

Coherence & Cohesion

Lexical Resource

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

Answers On The Same Topic:

Other Topics:

Plans & Pricing

Free

Premium