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Band 5+: You recently visited a local restaurant. The service and food were poor. Write a letter to the restaurant manager. Include: What happened Why you were unhappy What you want them to do

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Hi. My name is Bella, i was in your restaurant on Monday day in afternoon at time 16:26. Writing this letter because the service that I received that day were just terrible. I hope you will understand and solve this problem. I received a burger with a drink

The reason why I am unhappy because every time before I came here food here was delicious and this time when i come here with my colleague and reccomended your food this time how I said this before it was terrible. The bread of burger were dry as i rock. The cutlet were so raw, i think they just take it from fridge and set it on my food. Although I say them fry it until the end. But the situation with my colleague was the worst. She asked about medium rare, but her cultet was raw as fuck. However in her cutlet was short and curly hair, we think we would happy for lond and straight, but not for this.

Suggest you to correct this situation and if it is not will be correct I will post this for media. People mustn’t eat this shit, and how I know your restaurant is popular. You have correct this right now, and I was not saying about how you make me stupid in front of the colleage because she thinks now that i love and eats this shit every time.

Thank you, i hope you will read this letter and correct the situation.

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Vocabulary Complexity:
A2 - Upper Beginner
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because: 3

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Task Response

The letter addresses the task by describing the poor service, explaining the unhappiness, and suggesting improvements. However, the tone is overly aggressive and some of the language is inappropriate for a formal letter. The organization could also be improved with clearer paragraphing. To improve, focus on maintaining a polite and professional tone, even when expressing dissatisfaction. Also, ensure that your language is appropriate for the context and audience.

Coherence & Cohesion

The letter's organization is somewhat clear, but the flow of ideas is frequently disrupted by grammatical errors and awkward phrasing. Paragraphing could be improved to separate distinct points more effectively. To enhance coherence, use transition words and phrases to connect ideas between sentences and paragraphs. For example, clarify the sequence of events and the relationship between your experiences and your colleague's.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary used is basic and sometimes inappropriate for a formal letter to a restaurant manager. There's a reliance on simple words and phrases, and some word choices are not accurate ('cultet' instead of 'cutlet'). To improve, expand your vocabulary related to food quality, restaurant service, and expressing dissatisfaction. Use a thesaurus to find more suitable alternatives for words like 'terrible' and 'dry'. Boost vocabulary complexity to elevate the overall score.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The letter contains frequent grammatical errors, including incorrect verb tenses ('I received that day were just terrible'), subject-verb agreement issues, and incorrect use of articles. Sentence structure is often awkward and unclear. There are also issues with punctuation, such as missing commas and incorrect capitalization. To improve, focus on mastering basic grammar rules and sentence structures. Practice writing simple sentences and gradually incorporate more complex structures as your accuracy improves. Proofread carefully for errors in verb tense, subject-verb agreement, and punctuation.

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