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Band 5+: The chart below shows the number of immigrants to Germany by region in 2010 and 2020. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

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The image presents a bar chart titled 'The number of immigrants to Germany in 2000 and 2010', with the vertical axis representing millions. Immigrant numbers for 2000 were: Oceania 16 million, Europe 30 million, Africa 6 million, America 23 million, East Asia 15 million, and South Asia 5.5 million. For 2010, the numbers were: Oceania 23 million, Europe 25 million, Africa 7.5 million, America 13 million, East Asia 24 million, and South Asia 5 million.

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The bar chart depicts that immigration rate of Germany by area from 2010 and 2020.

Overall, it is clear that Europe had the highest number of immigration. Oceania, America, and East Asia had a moderate level; whereas, Africa and South Asia had a few number of immigrants. It is worth noticing that migration rate of all countires fluctuated all these years.

As it is presented in the data that Europe had the highest number of immigration in 2000, with 30 million people in a year. Following this America was the second largest countires with 22 million immigration in the same year. Following these, Oceaina and East Asian people were less 20 million in 2000. In contrast, Africa and South Asia were less than 10 million .

In 2010, all these immigration rate based on different countires had dramatically changed. Europe, which had the highest dropped to 25 million immigrate per year in 2010. Similarly, America fell sharply to less than 15 milllion immigration per year. However, other countries, such as Oceania and East Asia rose substantially to amost 20 milllion individuals per year. Africa and South Asia were remained less that 10 million, yet Africa slighlty increased and South Asia declining.

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immigration: 6

million: 6

africa: 4

south: 4

europe: 3

highest: 3

number: 3

america: 3

countires: 3

these: 3

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Task Response

The report addresses the main requirements of the task by identifying the highest and lowest categories and making comparisons between the two years. However, there are some inaccuracies in the data interpretation (for example, stating Oceania and East Asia rose to 'almost 20 million' when the data suggests they reached higher levels) and some inconsistencies in the years mentioned (the report mixes 2000 and 2010, whereas the task asks for 2010 and 2020). To improve, ensure that the years mentioned in the report strictly align with the task prompt and focus on more precise data reporting. Additionally, work on grammatical accuracy regarding subject-verb agreement and word choice (e.g., using 'number of immigrants' instead of 'immigration rate' when referring to absolute figures).

Coherence & Cohesion

The report follows a logical structure with an introduction, overview, and two body paragraphs. However, the progression is sometimes hindered by awkward phrasing and repetitive sentence structures. To improve, use a wider variety of cohesive devices and transition signals. For example, instead of starting multiple sentences with 'Following this' or 'Following these', try using 'In terms of...', 'Regarding...', or 'Moving on to...'. Ensure that each paragraph has a clear central topic that flows naturally into the next.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is somewhat limited and repetitive. There are several instances of incorrect word forms, such as using 'immigration' (the process) when 'immigrants' (the people) or 'immigration numbers' is required, and 'immigrate' used as a noun. Additionally, phrases like 'had a few number of immigrants' are unidiomatic; 'a small number of immigrants' would be more appropriate. Aim to use a broader range of synonyms for 'increase' (e.g., surged, climbed, rose) and 'decrease' (e.g., declined, plummeted, dropped) to demonstrate higher lexical flexibility.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

Grammatical errors are frequent and occasionally impede clarity. There are issues with subject-verb agreement, article usage (e.g., 'the immigration rate'), and sentence construction (e.g., 'Europe, which had the highest dropped to...'). There are also errors in pluralization (e.g., 'second largest countires'). To improve, focus on mastering complex sentence structures and ensuring that tense consistency is maintained throughout the report. Pay close attention to the distinction between nouns and verbs to avoid errors like '25 million immigrate'.

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