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Band 8+: Writing task 1 You stayed in a hotel and was not satisfied with service. Write a letter to manager. - why you chose this hotel - what problems did you face - tell the manager what to do

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I am writing to express my disappointment regarding my recent stay at your hotel, Green Garden , from March 6 to March 18. I chose your establishment based on its excellent online reviews and reputation for exceptional guest service.

During my stay, I encountered several issues that significantly impacted my comfort. Firstly, the housekeeping service was inconsistent—my room was not cleaned on two occasions, and fresh towels were not provided as requested. Additionally, the air conditioning in my room malfunctioned, making it extremely uncomfortable in the heat.

To address these concerns, I kindly request compensation for the inconveniences faced, such as a partial refund or a discount on a future stay.

I hope you will take my feedback seriously and take corrective measures. I look forward to your response.

Your sincerely

Savlat Zarifov

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Task Response

7.5

The letter adequately addresses all parts of the task. Minor improvements could enhance the explanation of the issues and the requested compensation. The letter falls short of the required 150 words.

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The letter flows smoothly and logically. The structure is clear and easy to follow.

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The vocabulary is appropriate and accurate. A slightly wider range of vocabulary could elevate the letter.

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