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Band 4+: You are part of a group of musicians who meet on Tuesday and Friday evenings to practise in the community hall. You have been told, however, that it is no longer possible for the group to use the hall. Write a letter to the manager. In the letter: • describe what the group does • explain why the group is good for the community • suggest alternative days and times for practice

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Dear sir, I am just writing this letter for saying about some truble with our music practice shadule.

firstly the community hall not availble in our planed date .we have alredy plan that go to community hall practice some music lesson and make some good things and also our music group make some good music in recend days hence i know that we need huge practice .

Moreover, We can acsept that group activities need to community because at the moment it create some habits among people like leadership, equality and accseptence failure as same victory. Fourthermore these type of group make happiness among people for example some music group make more entaitine than induvidule play some instument.

As well as I have idea for this problems that why we change our plan to wednesday and sunday evening. Thi is good to all our group members and this is possible days for our practice .

I look forward to hearing from you.

your sincirly

jathursan

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4.5
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Vocabulary Complexity:
B2 - Upper Intermediate
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Vocabulary Repetition:
music: 5
group: 5
practice: 4
community: 3
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Task Response

5.5
The letter adequately addresses all parts of the task. However, the response could be more detailed and organized for better clarity and impact.

Coherence & Cohesion

4.5
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Lexical Resource

5
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Grammatical Range & Accuracy

3
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