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Band 6+: You have recently gone to live in a new city. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: explain why you have moved tell about the city invite your friend to come and visit you

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Dear Raman,

I hope you are doing well and in good health.

I want to share some excited news with you that recently I have been moved to Brampton city.

As you know, I have been working for construction company as a civil engineer for past couple of years and was looking for new opportunity. Last month, organization announced their future plans to open new plant in Brampton. Moreover, I was promoted as Plant manager for this workplace. Therefore, I arranged accommodation near plant to avoid unnecessary travel.

The city is surrounding by nature. There are several breathtaking mountain views, historical monuments, garden are making it tourist attraction. In addition, city is well known for its food diversity. People can enjoy Indian, Italian and Mexican food under same roof.

Next month, I will host my birthday party. So, I would appreciate your presence here. We will spend quality time together and remind our memories.

I am looking forward to your response.

Take care,

Navdeep Singh

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B2 - Upper Intermediate
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Task Response

The letter appropriately addresses all parts of the task, explaining the reason for the move, describing the city, and inviting the friend to visit. The content is relevant and sufficiently detailed. To improve, consider adding more specific details about the city to make the description more vivid and engaging. For example, you could mention specific landmarks, restaurants, or cultural events.

Coherence & Cohesion

The letter is generally well-organized, with a clear introduction, body, and conclusion. However, some transitions could be smoother to improve the flow. For example, when transitioning between the reasons for moving and the description of the city, a clearer link could be established. Also, consider varying your sentence structure to enhance readability.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary used is appropriate for the task. Phrases like 'breathtaking mountain views' and 'food diversity' are effective. To further enhance your lexical resource, try incorporating more specific and nuanced vocabulary related to city life and personal experiences. For instance, instead of 'historical monuments,' you could name a specific monument or describe its significance.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The letter demonstrates a reasonable range of grammatical structures, but there are noticeable errors that affect clarity. For example, 'I have been moved' should be 'I have moved' or 'I was moved'. Also, 'surrounding by nature' should be 'surrounded by nature'. Pay close attention to verb tenses, prepositions, and subject-verb agreement. Proofreading carefully will help reduce these errors.

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