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Band 6+: You have recently purchased a toy from an online shop, but the delivered product is faulty. Write a letter to the owner of the shop. In your letter . describe the toy give details of the problem . tell the owner what you want him/her to do

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DEAR SIR OR MADAM,

I HOPE THIS LETTER FINDS YOU WELL. I AM WRITING TO DESCRIBE A DAMAGED TOY.LAST WEEK I HAD ORDERD FORM YOUR ONLINE WEBSITE.I CHECKED THE DESCRIPTION. I SELECTED ONE ELECTRIC CAR WHICH IS MOST LIKE MY CHILD. THE ELECTRIC CAR IS SO BEAUTIFUL AND THE LATEST SHAPE. WHEN I ORDERED THIS CAR. MY CHILD WAS SO HAPPY.

YESTERDAY I RECEIVED THE PRODUCT FROM THE DELIVERY COMPANY. WHEN I WAS OPEND PRODUCT AND CHECKED. SOME OF THE PARTS OF TOY DAMAGED. I DID NOT FIND A CAR BETTRY AND MOST IMPORTANTLY CAR PART WHEEL IS BROKEN. I WAS SO WORRIED. MY CHILD ALSO WAS CRYING BECAUSE TOY WAS NOT WORKING.

I HAVE SEEN THE TERMS AND CONDITIONS ON YOUR COMPANY WEBSITE. IF ANY CUSTOMER GETS THE DAMAGED PRODUCT, YOUR COMPANY POLICY IS TO REPLACE THE PRODUCT. I ADVISE PLEASE SEND THE NEW CAR TOY AS SOON AS POSSIBLE. MY CHILD WILL BECOME HAPPY.

THANK YOU FOR YOUR ATTENTION TO THIS MATTER. I LOOK FORWARD TO YOUR PROMPT RESPONSE.

YOURS SINCERELY,

BILAL AMJAD.

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Vocabulary Complexity:
A2 - Upper Beginner
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Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

child: 4

product: 4

damaged: 3

company: 3

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Task Response

The letter adequately addresses all aspects of the task. It provides a clear description of the toy, details the problem, and states the desired action.

Coherence & Cohesion

The letter is generally coherent, but there are some minor issues with sentence structure and flow. The use of paragraphs could be improved.

Lexical Resource

5.5

The letter uses a good range of vocabulary, but there are some instances of repetition and less formal language.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

4.5

There are several grammatical errors throughout the letter, which affect the overall clarity and fluency.

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Band 6+: You have recently purchased a toy from an online shop, but the delivered product is faulty. Write a letter to the owner of the shop. In your letter . describe the toy give details of the problem . tell the owner what you want him/her to do

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