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Band 4+: You recently attended a workshop that a local community center organized, and you were very impressed. Write a letter to the community center. - Thank them for organizing the workshop. - Describe what you enjoyed most about it. - Suggest topics for future workshops.

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Dear community center,

It was an honor to work with you and you organized the workshop very well, and the idea of bringing an celebrity to practice the pottery and it was very funny when he messes up all of his work.

You had such a good prezence and all the children loved to do unusually games, like they told me that the usual pottery was very nice to practice, and also that the organizators was very friendly.

Most of all, I liked the technice that you taught the children and how you put this skills in training. It seems you had a lot of good people in your team and also you have an excelent teamwork.

In the future, I will call you to do more than just one workshop and I want that you will be our partener in business. I will be very happy if you will accept this proposal.

With respect, Cebotari Alexandru

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Overall Band Score

4.5

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Vocabulary Complexity:
B1 - Intermediate
Using more sophisticated words could be beneficial.

Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:
No noticeable repetition! Great job!

Task Response

The letter addresses the task requirements but includes some irrelevant information and inaccuracies. The tone is not consistently formal, and the organization could be improved. To improve, focus on maintaining a formal tone throughout the letter, ensuring all information is relevant to the task, and organizing your points more clearly.

Coherence & Cohesion

The letter's organization is somewhat unclear, and the flow of ideas is not always smooth. The introduction abruptly mentions working with the center, which is confusing given the task. The body paragraphs lack clear topic sentences, making it difficult to follow the main points. The conclusion introduces a business proposal that is unrelated to the workshop feedback, disrupting the letter's focus. To improve coherence, ensure each paragraph has a clear purpose and that ideas transition logically. Avoid introducing unrelated topics in the conclusion.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary used is basic and lacks precision. There are instances of awkward phrasing, such as "good prezence" and "unusually games." The letter also contains some word choice errors (e.g., "technice" instead of "technique"). To enhance lexical resource, try to use more specific and varied vocabulary related to workshops and community events. Pay attention to collocations and idiomatic expressions to make your writing sound more natural.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The letter contains numerous grammatical errors, including incorrect verb tenses, subject-verb agreement issues, and awkward sentence structures. Examples include "he messes up," "organizators was very friendly," and "you put this skills in training." There are also issues with punctuation, such as missing commas and incorrect use of "and." To improve grammatical accuracy, focus on mastering basic grammar rules and sentence structures. Proofread carefully for errors in verb tense, subject-verb agreement, and punctuation. Consider using a grammar checker to identify and correct mistakes.

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