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Band 8+: Answering the right question and planning your response In many countries children are engaged in some kind of paid work. Some people regard this as completely wrong, while others consider it as valuable work experience, important for learning and taking responsibility. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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It is true that in many countries children are engaged in some form of paid work. While I tend towards the viewpoint that child labour is morally wrong, I would have to support a limited amount of children’s employment when it provides valuable experience and does not affect their education or health.

On the one hand, there are strong arguments against children being involved in paid work. To use a common example, some children in developing countries are forced to work long hours in factories or on farms under poor conditions. Opponents of child labour argue that such work deprives children of their right to education and a normal childhood. They believe that working at a young age harms children’s health and development more than it helps them. Furthermore, governments should protect children from exploitation and ensure that they attend school instead of working.

On the other hand, it can be argued that not all forms of child work are harmful. Supporters of this view believe that a limited amount of work can teach young people responsibility, independence, and the value of money. For instance, having a part-time job after school or helping in a family business can help children develop important life skills. They also argue that this kind of experience prepares them for adult life and future employment. Personally, I believe that such work should be carefully regulated to make sure it is safe and does not interfere with education.

In conclusion, it seems to me that it would be wrong to ban all types of paid work for children. Instead, governments and parents should ensure that children only do light, safe, and educational jobs that help them learn responsibility without sacrificing their studies or well-being.

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