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Band 8+: Some people believe that children should spend more time on academic subjects such as mathematics and science, while others think that creative subjects like art and music are just as important. Discuss both views and aive vour own opinion.

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In a world where mathematics and science control almost everything, from daily life to advanced technologies and AI, people debate whether students should focus only on subjects like science or whether individuals should be free to choose what they want to study, such as mathematics or art. In my opinion, despite the importance of mathematics and science, studying the arts should not be considered a secondary option, and students should be taught creative subjects as well.

To start with, there are several reasons why mathematics is used much more than arts and music nowadays. One of the biggest reasons is the rapid development of robots and AI-based fields. These days, cities are competing in the number of robots and artificial intelligence systems they use in everyday life. Cities like Tokyo and Shanghai have already started using robots to serve food to customers in restaurants, while other cities are replacing humans with robots in many factories. The only way to control these technologies is to understand their language, which is mathematics and English. Knowledge of these two fields is becoming increasingly popular and is in high demand among companies. Mathematics can help individuals in many situations, whether it is buying products in small shops or managing entire companies while sitting at a desk and writing code.

By sharp contrast, I still side with those who believe that learning the arts should not be ignored. Firstly, many people are already studying science, and in a world full of mathematicians, someone needs to be different. Someone must help bring ideas to life by creating designs and visual concepts. Artists are very important for programmers because, in order to turn code into a real product, design is essential. Many IT specialists create websites, programs, and start-ups, but every idea needs a final visual form. Imagine that the world’s best programmer creates a program, but because everyone is a mathematician, no one can design it properly to make it complete. Secondly, art is something that never disappears. AI tools like ChatGPT, Gemini, and Sora can create realistic images, but they will not gain value if people do not present them to the real world. Many businesspeople earn money by buying and selling art, and street artists gain popularity by creating murals on buildings and walls. Moreover, music is an essential part of humanity, and without it, the world would lose much of its beauty. This topic alone could be discussed endlessly.

To conclude, despite the importance of mathematics and science, studying the arts should not be considered a secondary option.

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