24 Hours Only: Get 39% OFF on Our Premium Plan - Check Out Now!
Opinion

Band 5+: Violence in playgrounds is increasing. However, it is important that parents should teach children not to hit back at bullies.

Note: Both the topic and the essay were created by one of our users.

Battle between children in the playground is an inevitable phenomenon. Parents’ role in teaching them not to go against the battle is important. In this essay, I will discuss how parents’ role in fostering and raising their kids is crucial, including how to communicate with other aggressive children in harmonious ways.

Staying calm against the battle or violence is important to avoid raising battles. While kids play with other kids sometimes arguments easily raise. It could be caused by many reasons, they disagree on their rules on games or want to play by just oneself. In this scenario, adults need to talk with their children and explain that it is a public area that every kid should equally enjoy, not just one kid to amuse. Moreover, adults should teach their kids not to get mad if the opponent kid’s bullies. Any violent situations try to not involve yourself and prioritise making things to work out with other kids. Furthermore, carers or parents need to talk about bullies and how to self-guard against it and advise them not to hide it if someone uses violence on them.

Violence could happen for many reasons. For example, stubborn kids only want to play their own ways, or bring new rules. I had an experience when I was a kid, my neighbour’s kid did not play with me as I was a kid who was responsible; I did not want to fight against him and just left. To avoid violence or bullies sometimes it is better to just leave and do not argue with them otherwise in harsh circumstances you might hurt yourself both emotionally and physically.

To conclude, even though safety is provided by adults, along with playing with other kids, they need to be watched out. Should be advised to talk in harmonious ways and try to understand what other kids need.

Word Count: 310

Essays On The Same Topic:

Violence in playgrounds is increasing. However, it is important that parents should teach children not to hit back at bullies.

In modern times, the violence in schools is increasing but some people believe that parents are solely responsible for guiding their children to not to fight back and cause damage to any other child. I strongly agree with this statement as hitting back will lead children to get injured more and will end up in […]

Violence in playgrounds is increasing. However, it is important that parents should teach children not to hit back at bullies.

Violence is an offence irrespective of the age, and everyone should be protected from it. However, in today’s time, violence and bullying are increasing in playgrounds among children. But, parents should teach their kids that there are solutions that can be addressed, instead of hitting back at bullies. In the playing field, mostly the elder […]

Violence in playgrounds is increasing. However, it is important that parents should teach children not to hit back at bullies.

It is true that parents sometimes face the challenge of how to teach their children to handle bullies effectively. While some agree that children should avoid hitting back, I disagree children should never hit back, as standing up to bullies can help children build confidence and reduce the emotional damage of bullying. On the one […]

Violence in playgrounds is increasing. However, it is important that parents should teach children not to hit back at bullies.

Truth be told, there have been some significant discussions and dialogues in respect to the fact that violence children is significantly increasing in playgrounds. I disagree with the statement that parents should teach children not to hit back at bullies. While it’s essential to promote peaceful conflict resolution, there are instances where self-defense is necessary, […]

Violence in playgrounds is increasing. However, it is important that parents should teach children not to hit back at bullies.

Bullying cases among children and teenagers have surged over the years, especially in children’s play areas. Parents should be responsible for their children’s response to insults and offenses. They have to explain how to react appropriately, moreover, they have to give kids the proper understanding that retaliation and revenge are the worst actions they can […]

See All

Other Topics:

Some people think mobi phones should be bannedin places like liblaries, shops and on public transport. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

The question of whether public places like libraries, shops, and public transport should prohibit the use of phones. While others argue that to provide safety and convenience, phones should be used everywhere, I subscribe to the idea that they can disturb others and may create an unpleasant environment. Proponents of the idea that phones should […]

In many countries, paying for things using mobile phone apps has become increasingly common. Does this development have more advantages or more disadvantages?

in today’s world, people are increasingly dependent on their electronic devices such as mobile phones and laptops. In the modern era, many prefer to make payments using their electronic gadgets. From my perspective, this trend has more disadvantages than advantages, although there are some benefits as well. To begin with, the advantages of using mobile […]

Research has shown that spending much less time in the office can reduce the use of energy (for example, electricity, gas). Thus, some companies close for some days a week. Do the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages?

Inspired by the realisation that energy consumption can be checked by reducing the time spent by employees in offices, many companies have adopted strategies like reducing the number of days in a month. However, some people feel that such a plan can have a negative impact on the performance of businesses and the welfare of […]

Artificial Intelligence: Friend or enemy. Today, AI into everywhere. without AI you can work.

Artificial Intelligence: Friend or enemy. Today, AI is everywhere. Without AI, you cannot work. Nowadays, without AI we can’t operate factories or hospital equipment. And with the increasing spread of AI applications, it is very useful for work or studying. AI tools are changing life; we can learn anything in a short time, and they […]

Some people believe that it is possible for a country to be economically successful and have a clean environment. Others argue that these two objectives are not compatible. Discuss both the views and give your opinion #task2

Some people believe that economic success and a clean environment can coexist, while others argue that development always harms nature. This essay will discuss both views and explain why I believe sustainable progress is entirely possible. On one side, many people argue that economic growth damages the environment. They believe that factories, construction and industrial […]

Some people believe that zoos are cruel and should be banned. Others argue that zoos play an important role in protecting endangered species.

People’s views are divided regarding zoos: while some claim that zoos are not beneficial for animals living there and must be restricted, others believe that they are essential for conservation of animals, especially for endangered ones. I strongly support the second view. A group of people can argue that zoos must be barred as they […]

See All
We have detected unusual activity on your device.
Please verify your identity to continue.
Note: This verification step won't sign you in. If you have a premium account, please log in to access the service as usual.
Google/Gmail Verification
Or verify using Email/Code
We've sent a verification code to:
youremail@gmail.com (Not your email?)
Enter it below to complete the verification process.
Ensure your email address is correct, your inbox is not full, and you check your spam folder. If no email arrives, consider using an alternative email.
You will need a Premium plan to perform your action!
Note: If you already have a premium account, please log in to access our services as usual.

Plans & Pricing

Our mission is to make quality education accessible and free for everyone.
However, to keep our hardworking team running and this service alive, we genuinely need your support!
By opting for a premium plan, not only do you sustain us in achieving the mission, but you also unlock advanced features to enrich your learning experience.

Free

For learners who aren't pressed for time

What's included on Free
1000+ IELTS Tests & Samples
Instant IELTS Writing Task 1 & 2 Evaluation (2 times/month)
Instant IELTS Speaking Part 1, 2, & 3 Evaluation (5 times/month)
Instant IELTS Writing Task 1 & 2 Essay Generator (2 times/month)
500+ Dictation & Shadowing Exercises
100+ Pronunciation Exercises
Flashcards
Other Advanced Tools

Premium

For those serious about advancing their English proficiency, and for IELTS candidates aspiring to boost their band score by 1-2 points (especially in writing & speaking) in just 30 days or less

What's included on Premium
Save Your IELTS Test Progress
Unlock All Courses & Content
Unlimited AI Conversations
Unlimited AI Writing Enhancement Exercises
Unlimited IELTS Writing Task 1 & 2 Evaluation
Unlimited IELTS Speaking Part 1, 2, & 3 Evaluation
Checked Answers Will Not Be Published
Unlimited IELTS Writing Task 1 & 2 Essay Generator
Unlimited IELTS Speaking Part 1, 2, & 3 Sample Generator
Unlimited Usage Of Advanced Tools

Due to the nature of our service and the provided free trials, payments are non-refundable.
Nếu bạn là người Việt Nam và không có hoặc không muốn trả bằng credit/debit cards, bạn có thể thanh toán bằng phương thức chuyển khoản:



Chọn gói:
279,000₫ 157,000 ₫ cho gói 1 tháng (chỉ 5,233₫/ngày)
819,000₫ 397,000 ₫ cho gói 3 tháng (chỉ 4,411₫/ngày)
1,649,000₫ 667,000 ₫ cho gói 6 tháng (chỉ 3,706₫/ngày)
3,299,000₫ 857,000 ₫ cho gói 12 tháng (chỉ 2,381₫/ngày)


Sau khi chuyển khoản, vui lòng đợi trình duyệt tự động điều hướng bạn trở lại Engnovate và bạn sẽ ngay lập tức nhận được mã kích hoạt tài khoản premium.
Nếu có lỗi xảy ra, bạn có thể liên hệ với team thông qua một trong các phương thức: email đến helloengnovate@gmail.com hoặc nhắn tin qua facebook.com/engnovate.
Vì toàn bộ công cụ trên website đều có thể sử dụng thử miễn phí, Engnovate không hỗ trợ hoàn tiền.