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Band 5+: You are unhappy with the gym that you recently joined. Write a letter to the gym manager. - Explain what you like about the gym. - Describe what problems you have experienced. - Suggest what the gym could do to improve.

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Hello Mr. Smith

I am one of your member of this Gym . I was really enjoying coming to this gym every single day till last two weeks. A new member came in to the gym and after that day nothing went right for me. He was shouting,bullying more over he never cleaned the machine after he used it. It is a shame! I would like you to talk to that person and tried to solve this problem cause I am not only the one who is being bullied by him. By the way I am obsessed with the new machine! I used it almost two weeks now and I can see results already! It workes perfectly! You can add a few more machines for leg works it would improve your Gym a lot. Thanks for reading my letter.

Have a great day.

From Elif

Word Count: 145

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Overall Band Score

5.5

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Vocabulary Complexity:
A1 - Beginner
Aim to use more advanced language.

Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:
No noticeable repetition! Great job!

Task Response

The letter addresses the task by explaining a positive aspect of the gym (the new machine), describing a problem (the new member's behavior), and suggesting an improvement (adding more leg machines). However, the explanation of what you like about the gym is brief, and the description of the problems could be more detailed. The letter also lacks a formal tone and structure. To improve, provide more specific details about both the positive and negative aspects of your experience. Also, use more formal language and structure the letter with clear paragraphs for each point. The letter falls short of the required 150 words.

Coherence & Cohesion

The letter is generally understandable, but the organization could be improved. Consider dedicating separate paragraphs to each point mentioned in the task: what you like, the problems you've experienced, and your suggestions for improvement. This will enhance the letter's clarity and flow.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is adequate for the task, but there's room to use more precise and varied language. For example, instead of 'shouting, bullying,' you could use more specific terms like 'being disruptive and intimidating.' Expanding your vocabulary will make your writing more impactful. Boost vocabulary complexity to elevate the overall score.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

There are several grammatical errors that affect the clarity of the letter. For example, 'one of your member' should be 'one of your members,' and 'tried to solve this problem cause I am not only the one' should be rephrased for better grammar and clarity. Reviewing basic grammar rules and sentence structures would be beneficial.

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Band 5+: You are unhappy with the gym that you recently joined. Write a letter to the gym manager. - Explain what you like about the gym. - Describe what problems you have experienced. - Suggest what the gym could do to improve.

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